Is your plot falling apart? Do you need a full critique? Do you need help keeping track of all the irons you have in the fire?

     Below are some links to some services that will help you out.

Story Sensei Story Sensei critique service Has your manuscript been rejected by an editor or agent, and you're not sure why? Often a novel is rejected because of a weak story structure, like a heroine's internal goal is never fully developed, or the conflicts don't act directly against the hero's external goal, and so the story seems disjointed. Certain story elements naturally combine to create a riveting reading flow, but if your scene or plot is weak in one of those elements, the manuscript will seem off-kilter. Synopsis critique -- book doctoring $60 I will do a high-level developmental critique of your synopsis, pinpointing any structural issues in your story and offering suggestions to create a more cohesive, compelling storyline. To see an example of what a comprehensive structural critique looks like, visit my website for a downloadable .pdf file. Novel Manuscript critique I also offer detailed critiques of PARTIAL or FULL manuscripts. I will identify any weaknesses in story structure, character arcs, writing style, and other aspects of a developmental critique. I will also analyze for key writing and story elements. I charge a flat rate based on your manuscript’s total computer word count. Price ranges from 1.3¢ to 1¢ per word depending on manuscript length. See my website for pricing chart. Endorsements Go to my website for reviews from published authors and contest finalists. See my blog at www.StorySensei.com for writing tips and the latest information about my services. Critique Boutique In her critique business, the Critique Boutique, Robin will do amazing detailed line edits of your work. She will also do complete manuscripts, while I only do partials. Here's some information on the Critique Boutique: Have you got a work in progress you need polished before entering a contest? Do you have a work in progress you’d like some feedback on? Do you have a completed manuscript you need “tweaked” before submitting it to an editor? If you answered YES to any of these questions, Critique Boutique can help you! We specialize in fiction manuscript critique services. Our fees are modestly set, based on word count, NOT page count. Get as much, or as little of your manuscript critiqued, according to YOUR needs. Elements covered in a critique include: Beginning “hook” POV issues Plot points Settings Narrative/Dialogue Characterization Flow Active/Passive Showing/Telling Tension/Pacing Need a quick critique? No problem…Critique Boutique offers a 36-hour turnaround option. Bring the experience of Critique Boutique to YOUR manuscript! An experienced critique-er, contest finalist, judge for various RWA contests, RWA PRO, judge for published book contests can critique YOUR manuscript! Fees: To offer the lowest-price for the highest quality critique, Critique Boutique has flat rate charges. Contact the Critique Boutique for more information at http://www.robinmillerbooks.com/CritiqueBoutique.html or visit the blog at: http://critiqueboutique.blogspot.com Robin Miller Stories to keep you on the edge of your seat... Critique Boutique, for all your ms critiquing needs! robincmiller@sbcglobal.net www.robinmillerbooks.com http://robinswritingworld.blogspot.com/ 2005 Noble Theme 3rd Place, Suspense 2005 Sweet, Spicy, Spooky & Suspense Finalist, Suspense

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